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No More Mr. Eloquent

barack obama and michelle obama walking during inaugural parade Charles Dharapak / AP Photo Obama’s inaugural speech had few rhetorical highs, but it was nonetheless a dazzling performance, a dose of tough love from a man who is already hard at work.

Did it soar? Did the pilot lift America and the rest of the watching world into a better place by the sheer thrust of his rhetorical engines? No, not exactly. Maybe there was ice on the wings of Obama’s prose, and not just deposited by the knife-slicing January cold. The chill was more a matter of mood: his and the country’s at a moment of unparalleled crisis. So there was no sugar-coating; not much in the way of head-patting and lullabies. What there was instead was great seriousness of tone and substance; the integrity that comes from telling it like it is; a feeling that the time was too tough for cheap lyrics. Even the delivery was urgent, decidedly unplayful. The words came at a fast clip, threatening to break into a run, rather than the easy grace; they were timed with his cool body language that I saw a year ago in Iowa and then again in San Antonio just before Super Tuesday, Obama having fun with his own powers of magnetism. This was not, he had decided, an occasion for verbal confectionery. There may have been a sprinkling of the Usual Suspects among the coats up on the glacial crag of the Capitol steps—John Cusack, Sean Combs aka Puff Daddy—but this particular morning was never going to be about entertainment. “It is time” Barack said, quoting scripture in apostolic mode, to “put away childish things”

The person they had just heard was not, after all, a wordsmith. He is, they know, at long last and in our dire straits, a leader.

There was not even much in the way of marveling congratulation that the centuries of racial hate and oppression, the deep taint on America’s founding, had finally been wiped away. With one neat, clean little sentence, the 44th President finally allowed the third president, the slaveowner Thomas Jefferson, who had asserted his country’s rebellion to be fired by the proposition that all men were created equal, to stop writhing in his Monticello tomb. Now Obama said, the piety had at last been made true. Though Obama referred (without speaking specifically of Martin Luther King) to the dream that had been set before America decades ago on the steps of the Lincoln Memorial now having been made reality, it was left to the veteran civil rights campaigner of that older generation, the Rev. Joseph Lowery, to pluck the strings of the heart with his fabulously politically incorrect couplets “if you’re black, don’t give it back..if you’re yeller, just be meller…” For Obama, it had been done. That was wonder enough. Fine, now can we forget about it and get on with Matters At Hand, for if we simply sit around and feel good, the country and the world will simply go to hell. It was though he was talking to us, not from the podium at all, but somehow as though already hard at work, looking up from his desk behind a sheaf of papers and a stack of trouble, interrupting the immense task to give America its marching orders; to say “we’re in this together. Don’t expect miracles. Life has changed. Get used to it. The world has changed. We can cope with it.” His exact words were simultaneously daunting and thrilling with the sheer weight of their significance: “the time has come to remake America.”

Nothing could be more distant from the empty sunshine of Reagan’s “morning in America” platitude that inaugurated the chuckle-headed race for loot that has now tumbled over a cliff. Obama went out of his way to pour a little benediction on the free market, never doubting that it was still a great force for Adam Smith’s notion of happiness. But it was tempered with reminders of the need for mutuality, for interdependence. And spiced with pure Franklin when he cleared away the tedious, relentless debate about the size of government by insisting that the true issue is not whether government is too big or too small but whether it works. Memories of post-Katrina revulsion at incompetence were cued up. But Obama knows that Americans across the spectrum of cultures and ideologies cherish common decency and things that do indeed work. And he evidently means to make both happen. Programs that do work would be sustained; those that don’t would be junked. Who could argue with that? So cockle-warming was scant. Some of the most powerful and moving passages of word-painting were scenes of American desolation “houses shuttered,” people out of work, south Chicago on his mind. But if sometimes he had trouble lifting his audience up, he never brought them down; every bleak reality followed by an equally heartening truth. Yes, things have changed, he allowed, but some things, the important things have not. The economy has somehow unraveled, but America is still the same nation of people who work hard, invent ingeniously, produce the services the nation and world needs. That is not the nation that has come undone and it will be that true America that in adversity summons the strength and resolve to remake itself. And you had to believe him.

Was it what the ocean of people had surged to this hill by the Potomac to hear, this exercise in tough love? No great roars of joy or exultation sounded off up and down the Mall. The cello of Yo-Yo Ma, playing John Williams’s variations on the Shaker hymn “Simple Gifts,” triggered a deeper throb of the heart. But people I spoke to in the subway afterwards—running into unknown doorways to get some sensation back in their extremities—all loved it, the word they used again and again. What they felt awed by, I think, was the uncanny sense that this 47-year-old had somehow internalized all of American experience, going right back to the founding fathers to the point that he had become inseparable from its history. The most startling phrase in the whole speech was when Obama spoke of tasting “the bitter swill” of slavery, civil war, and segregation as though it rose from his gut now and again in filthy reflux. But what the crowd also loved was his capacity on this wintriest of days to invoke Valley Forge and the Crossing of Delaware; to quote that whitest of fathers, the one with the guilty conscience who freed his slaves on his death and who had spoken of the spirit of virtue and honor that would pull the cause through its tribulation. When Obama conjured up Washington in Washington, it was not some token history lecture he was giving. It was though the tough, taciturn, clipped General had spoken to him and told him to ease off on the rhetorical honey and give his people instead the nourishment of patriotic fortitude, to draw deep and come forth strong. That he did, and that’s why, even if the connoisseurs of verbal fancy demur, the people on the subway were right to feel both comforted and inspired. The person they had just heard was not, after all, a wordsmith. He is, they know, at long last and in our dire straits, a leader.

Simon Schama is a professor of history and art history at Columbia University. He has been an essayist and critic for The New Yorker since 1994, his art criticism winning the National Magazine Award in 1996. Parts III and IV of his new series, The American Future: A History, air Tuesday night at 8 p.m. on BBC America.


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January 20, 2009 | 6:09pm
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atsegga

The Borgen Project has some good info on the cost of addressing global poverty.

$30 billion: Annual shortfall to end world hunger.
$550 billion: U.S. Defense budget

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6:32 pm, Jan 20, 2009

PunkRockRepublican

Its remarkable how much he was trying to channel President George W. Bush. We'll see over time if he's successful at it.

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6:35 pm, Jan 20, 2009

Annie2013

Not Washington - Paine The American Crisis I:

Let it be told to the future world, that in the depth of winter, when nothing but hope and virtue could survive, that the city and the country, alarmed at one common danger, came forth to meet and to repulse it. (emphasis added - component of Barack Obama's Inaugural Speech 01/20/2009)

http://revolutionredux.wordpress.com/2008/02/13/the-american-crisis-by-t homas-paine-i/

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7:02 pm, Jan 20, 2009

epicureandealmaker

Palliatives and empty rhetoric is not what is called for at this time. To his credit, Obama recognized this, and gave us the speech that this nation really needed to hear.

The precedent is a long and strong one:

In this crisis I think I may be pardoned if 1 do not address the House at any length today, and I hope that any of my friends and colleagues or former colleagues who are affected by the political reconstruction will make all allowances for any lack of ceremony with which it has been necessary to act.

I say to the House as I said to ministers who have joined this government, I have nothing to offer but blood, toil, tears, and sweat. We have before us an ordeal of the most grievous kind. We have before us many, many months of struggle and suffering.

You ask, what is our policy? I say it is to wage war by land, sea, and air. War with all our might and with all the strength God has given us, and to wage war against a monstrous tyranny never surpassed in the dark and lamentable catalogue of human crime. That is our policy.

You ask, what is our aim? I can answer in one word. It is victory. Victory at all costs - Victory in spite of all terrors - Victory, however long and hard the road may be, for without victory there is no survival.

Let that be realized. No survival for the British Empire, no survival for all that the British Empire has stood for, no survival for the urge, the impulse of the ages, that mankind shall move forward toward his goal.

I take up my task in buoyancy and hope. I feel sure that our cause will not be suffered to fail among men. I feel entitled at this juncture, at this time, to claim the aid of all and to say, "Come then, let us go forward together with our united strength."

Winston Churchill - May 13, 1940

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8:06 pm, Jan 20, 2009

KristaJulieva

All the better it didn't soar--rhetoric that soars is typically also airy, fleeting. This was still brilliant oratory, in my opinion. You could tell it had not been written without an eye to coining a sound bite for the ages a la JFK, FDR--it was densely packed with serious ideas, stirring yet sobering. As a whole I think it is a speech that may stack up with a classic such as Lincoln's second inaugural. (I'm an Obama supporter, but not of the Kool-Aid variety! I really just think that it was a magnificent speech.)

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9:54 pm, Jan 20, 2009

njnoecker

Please. Washington, before he became President was the most accomplished military strategist and General of his era, the most skilled horseman in the colonies, a successful explorer, surveyor and farmer, while Obama has a swisher and "a speech he gave in 2004," to quote the democrat Secretary of State. Man-oh-man...has the bar been lowered or what? Prayers.

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10:40 pm, Jan 20, 2009

bencharif

njnoecker: No, YOU fucking please.

You don't have to drink the Obama Kool-Aid, and I would hardly deny it exists, to recognize a powerful intellect, a natural-born communicator and a cunning strategist in a man who has managed to navigate his way through all the disasters, real and manufactured, that have been thrown in his path.

Your comment is of a piece with Tucker Carlson's in this roundup, in which, desperate to find some sort of flaw, somewhere, anywhere, he detects nervousness and tension--clearly heralding the unraveling of the Obama presidency before it really begins.

You reveal your own desperation by quoting a source--the 'democrat' secretary of state--that you would surely revile under most other circumstances. Her comments, delivered in the heat of the campaign, provide convenient support for your position, but that doesn't make them true.

Sorry, njnoecker, but you're going to have to do a lot better than this let-me-find-something,-anything! observation.

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11:23 pm, Jan 20, 2009

finderj

President Obama's speech flew, alright, just didn't soar and float aimlessly over the heads of his audience. he didn't jsut speak to the millions gathered on theMall, or around their televisions ets in America - he spoke of American heritage, American integrity, American vision to the entire world. He didn't cover it up with smooth talk, with slick political dogma. or with pretty rhetoric. He spoke what is for millons of Americans the unvarnished truth. This is a great nation. It is a young nation, with lessons till to learn, but this is a great nation with great capacity, great responsibility, and it is time for us to act our age. Perhaps President Obama can be the leader who helps us mature as a people, as a nation. It is, after all, what we voted for when we elected him, and what he promised us when he asked us to vote for him.

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12:20 am, Jan 21, 2009

overdue

News flash, Mr Schama!
Similes do not a good journalist make.
Talk about using too many flourishes. Who was able to read the whole article? Not I.

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2:08 am, Jan 21, 2009

NWnLA411

copying W.? Puleeze! After 8 years and 2 librarians in his family -Can he even read/write on his own b/c my 5 year speaqks more eloquently than he ever has? Obama gave it to us straight just like he tells his own children...you're going to have to "earn" rewards...they will no longer be just handed out because we know you-Everyone must pitch in to help this country run better. And now the GOP is known throughout the world for pissing away a major surplus, starting 2 wars w/ people not involved in 9/11 and bankrupting the WORLD!!! you can rewrite history here but the truth will be everywhere else!

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3:31 am, Jan 21, 2009

frenchyjoe

Obama's speech framed a picture of our nation - where it came from, what it had gone through, and where it is now. He told us what it will take to get through this morass built by a theocracy. The speech was all business - serious business. Read the taxt of his speech. Poetry or prayers will not suffice to keep our great nation from becoming regional dynasties. Republicans take note. Money will not rule. Life will rule. OBAMA O U MAMA.

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4:00 am, Jan 21, 2009

venezia

He made us all own our past and our future, like responsible citizens.

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8:53 am, Jan 21, 2009

MysteriousTraveller

To me the speech signaled that there are now adults in charge.
How refreshing!

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2:42 pm, Jan 21, 2009

Spasticula

Everybody who's boosting the speech. Name one line that stood out for you and why, and no it can't be the one about his dad. (That was the only memorable line in twenty minutes.)

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5:41 pm, Jan 21, 2009

funkychicken

finderj & MysteriousTraveller:

Well said.

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6:27 pm, Jan 21, 2009
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