The Writer Will See You Now
It’s not an official medical report, and it won’t help doctors treat the patient it’s about, but Dr. Dena Rifkin’s write-up tells a story that the dry clinical language of medicine never could. “There are startling moments that you don’t forget,” it begins, and clearly this was one of them—a night in which a young Rifkin, not even yet an M.D., stumbled out of sleep and into a patient’s room to find him soaked in blood. “The patient looked up at me, and opened his mouth as if to speak,” she writes. “Blood came out instead of words, slick and shiny as an oil spill.”
That patient is long since out of her hands, and it’s too late to help him. But by writing about him, Rifkin may be helping herself—and, in the long run, her future patients. The piece was her submission to a Yale writing workshop for young doctors taught by the medical writer Dr. Abraham Verghese. Rifkin liked the seminar so much she went back for a second round with author Dr. Richard Selzer. And the program’s organizers were even more pleased. As they announced in the October Journal of General Internal Medicine, the workshop improved not just the doctors’ view of their profession, but also their view of those in their care. Anna Reisman, an assistant professor of internal medicine at Yale who runs the program, says that learning to write well may have even made them better doctors.
That’s an idea medical schools can appreciate—and a growing number of them are putting it into practice. More than 80 percent of American med schools now offer some form of training in literary studies or “narrative medicine,” says Dr. Rita Charon, who coined the term and leads the program at Columbia University. Many medical schools, including those at premier universities such as NYU and Dartmouth, even have their own student literary journals. Reisman’s program, a two-and-a-half day discussion group modeled on the Iowa Writers’ Workshop, has thus far enrolled 35 students. She got the idea for it because writing was something she’d been doing all along. “I started keeping a journal on day one of medical school, and it saved me,” she says. “Putting these things on paper makes them real. You can go back to them and there they are, as raw as the day you wrote them.”
She’s certainly not the first to feel that way; William Carlos Williams famously kept a notebook while he was in training, writing essays about his patients after finishing his shifts. For many doctors, however, the standard coping strategy for stressful, and often life-and-death, medical situations is not to explore their feelings, but to bury them. Reisman calls this the “hidden curriculum” of medical training—not one that’s expressly taught, but one that leads to an “erosion of values” as young doctors become disillusioned and less empathetic to patients. Charon says that emotional detachment eventually can drive doctors out of medicine altogether. “People talk about burnout,” she says. “What that means is that there’s no more room for the self.”
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Mary Carmichael was named General Editor in January 2007 after six years with Newsweek. She writes primarily for the Health, Science, and Society sections of the magazine. Previously, she was an assistant editor since 2003, contributing to the Science and Technology, Society and Tip Sheet sections of the magazine. She came to Newsweek in June 2001 as an intern for the Periscope section.
In her time at Newsweek, Carmichael has written three cover stories and contributed to many more. She also reported on-site from Ground Zero on September 11. She studied statistics with the Weidenbaum Center in 2006 and was a Journalism Fellow at the Woods Hole Oceanographic Institution in 2003. She is also the co-author of the books "In the Beginning" and "Med School in a Box," and writes regularly for the Boston Globe Sunday magazine and other publications.
Carmichael has also worked as the producer of The Infinite Mind on National Public Radio, as an associate web producer of Frontline, as editor-in-chief for special projects for mental_floss magazine, and as a reporter for the St. Petersburg Times and the News & Observer of Raleigh. She graduated from Duke University with a B.A. in biological anthropology and public policy and completed a year of graduate work in psychology and anthropology at Columbia University.
She lives in Boston.
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